Friday, August 31, 2018

23 Essential Quotes From Ernest Hemingway About Writing

Ernest Hemingway was one of the most influential writers of the 20th century. Writers such as J.D. Salinger and Ray Bradbury have claimed Hemingway as an influence. Most writers seem to either love him — and are influenced by his clear, direct prose — or hate him. John Irving said he objected to the “offensive tough-guy posturing — all those stiff-upper-lip, don’t-say-much men.”

23 Essential Quotes from Ernest Hemingway About Writing

Regardless of your personal feelings, Hemingway’s insight into the craft of writing is unparalleled, as you’ll see.

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Hemingway’s Writer Life

When my English Literature professor, Marilyn McEntyre, told us Hemingway would write all day in small Parisian cafes and, afterward, take his lunch to the Musée du Luxembourg where he would look at Cezannes, it transformed how I looked at authors — and writing, for that matter — forever.

In college, I read Faulkner, Dostoyevsky, Tolstoy and all the other writers infamous among college students everywhere. The authors, if I had imagined them, were like statues in some museum, old cracked marble missing limbs, dust piled atop their heads. They were empty-eyed faces carved into cathedral stone, looking down on us to make sure we knew their names. If we misremembered, they would denounce us before God at those golden gates.

But Dr. McEntyre’s story tore the veil. I saw Hemingway drinking cups of French coffee at a cafe with black and white pictures on the wall, writing slowly, with lots of crossouts. I saw him with his sacked lunch, made by his loving first wife Hadley, drinking out of a thermos (did they have those in the 1920s?) and tracing those bold brushstrokes with his eyes. He had intense blue eyes.

Writers, I realized, were somehow not part of the evil plan hatched by professors to torture their students, but real people, with real ambitions and insecurities. I’ve heard the point of art is not communication, but I realized then they were trying to give something to me, some greater perspective of the world maybe. Or even just an enjoyable afternoon.

The Writer’s Inheritance

When I began learning about Hemingway’s life and influences, it helped me to realize that to transform the way I approached writing, I needed to see myself as part of the tradition. There is a great continuum in this art form, an inheritance that every writer can and should apprentice themselves to.

But there is a divergence in Hemingway. He didn’t apprentice himself just to writers. He looked to a painter to transform his work.

When he visited the Musée de Luxembourg, he didn’t just glance at the Cezannes. He studied them, and invited the artist to influence his writing.

What did Hemingway learn from Cezanne?

I wish I were more of an expert in art, but I do know Cezanne believed in using big bold brush strokes. His painting of Saint Victoire mountains could have been done with on an iPhone. Strong strokes construct the landscape like Lincoln logs.

Hemingway believed each word was a brush stroke on the page. Some people have called Hemingway’s prose childish and simplistic, but his genius was his use of a few strong words to do so much work. He used few adjectives. His prose is full of action, not decor, and so when an occasional bit of color is revealed, it fills in the whole image.

Learn From Hemingway Learning From Cezanne

It’s your turn to enter into the literary tradition, to write your way into your inheritance. Just as Hemingway studied the Cezannes at the Musée de Luxembourg, take time to study Hemingway’s writing.

The good news is, Hemingway had lots of advice for other writers. Which of his tips will you try in your writing next?

23 Ernest Hemingway Quotes for Writers

All of Ernest Hemingway’s quotes in this article are from A Moveable Feast, Ernest Hemingway‘s memoir about his life as a writer in Paris:

1. “Do not worry. You have always written before…”

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I would stand and look out over the roofs of Paris and think, “Do not worry. You have always written before and you will write now.”

2. All You Need to Write Is…

The blue-backed notebooks, the two pencils and the pencil sharpener (a pocket knife was too wasteful), the marble topped tables, the smell of early morning, sweeping out and mopping, and luck were all you needed. For luck, you carried a horse chestnut and a rabbit’s foot in your right pocket.

3. Write One True Sentence

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“All you have to do is write one true sentence. Write the truest sentence that you know.” So finally I would write one true sentence, and then go on from there. It was easy then because there was always one true sentence that I knew or had seen or had heard someone say.

4. Cut Out the Ornamentation

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If I started to write elaborately, or like someone introducing or presenting something, I found that I could cut that scrollwork or ornament out and throw it away and start with the first true simple declarative sentence I had written.

5. Don’t Think About Your Writing When You’re Not Writing

It was in that room too that I learned not to think about anything that I was writing from the time I stopped writing until I started again the next day. That way my subconscious would be working on it and at the same time I would be listening to other people and noticing everything.

6. Write as Straight as You Can

Ernest Hemingway to F. Scott Fitzgerald:

“Write the best story that you can and write it as straight as you can.”

7. Write What You Know

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Up in that room I decided that I would write one story about each thing that I knew about. I was trying to do this all the time I was writing, and it was good and severe discipline.

8. Allow Painters to Influence You

I was learning something from the painting of Cézanne that made writing simple true sentences far from enough to make the stories have the dimensions that I was trying to put in them. I was learning very much from him but I was not articulate enough to explain it to anyone. Besides it was a secret.

9. Don’t Repeat Yourself

This book began magnificently, went on very well for a long way with great stretches of great brilliance and then went on endlessly in repetitions that a more conscientious and less lazy writer would have put in the waste basket.

10. Exercise

It was necessary to get exercise, to be tired in the body, and it was very good to make love with whom you loved. That was better than anything. But afterwards, when you were empty, it was necessary to read in order not to think or worry about your work until you could do it again.

11. Never Empty the Well of Your Writing

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I had learned already never to empty the well of my writing, but always to stop when there was still something there in the deep part of the well, and let it refill at night from the springs that fed it.

12. After You Write, Read

When I was writing, it was necessary for me to read after I had written. If you kept thinking about it, you would lose the thing that you were writing before you could go on with it the next day.

13. Let the Pressure Build

When I had to write it, then it would be the only thing to do and there would be no choice. Let the pressure build. In the meantime I would write a long story about whatever I knew best.

14. What Do You know Best?

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What did I know best that I had not written about and lost? What did I know about truly and care for the most? There was no choice at all.

15. Omit Anything You Want (As Long As You Know You’re Doing It)

It was a very simple story called “Out of Season” and I had omitted the real end of it which was that the old man hanged himself. This was omitted on my new theory that you could omit anything if you knew that you omitted and the omitted part would strengthen the story and make people feel something more than they understood.

16. Stay Sound in Your Head

All I must do now was stay sound and good in my head until morning when I would start to work again.

17. If You Can’t Write, Don’t Write

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To an aspiring writer: “You shouldn’t write if you can’t write.”

18. It’s Okay to Be Shy

… [F. Scott Fitzgerald] had the shyness about it that all non-conceited writers have when they have done something very fine.

19. But Don’t Pimp Your Writing

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[F. Scott Fitzgerald] had told me at the Closerie des Lilas how he wrote what he thought were good stories, and which really were good stories for the Post, and then changed them for submission, knowing exactly how he must make the twists that made them into salable magazine stories. I had been shocked at this and I said I thought it was whoring…. I said that I did not believe anyone could write any way except the very best he could write without destroying his talent.

20. Break Down Your Writing

Since I had started to break down all my writing and get rid of all facility and try to make instead of describe, writing had been wonderful to do. But it was very difficult, and I did not know how I would ever write anything as long as a novel. It often took me a full morning of work to write a paragraph.

21. Forget Living the “Literary Life”

I was getting tired of the literary life, if this was the literary life that I was leading, and already I missed not working and I felt the death loneliness that comes at the end of every day that is wasted in your life.

22. Don’t Drink While You Write

My training was never to drink after dinner nor before I wrote nor while I was writing.

23. Don’t Judge Your Writing Until the Next Day

After writing a story I was always empty and both sad and happy, as though I had made love, and I was sure this was a very good story although I would not know truly how good until I read it over the next day.

Bonus Quotes from Hemingway’s Mentors

The following are not Ernest Hemingway’s quotes. Instead, they are tips to Ernest Hemingway from his friends and mentors which he captured in A Moveable Feast:

24. Be Careful About Writing About Sex

“It’s good,” [Gertrude Stein] said. “That’s not the question at all. But it is inaccrochable. That means it is like a picture that a painter paints and then he cannot hang it when he has a show and nobody will buy it because they cannot hang it either.”

innacroachable, def (via Wiktionary)

  1. (of a painting) unable to be hung (or sold), especially because of its sexual content
  2. (of a book) unable to be published, for the same reason

25. What We Lack Most

“We need more true mystery in our lives, Hem,” [Evan Shipman] once said to me. “The completely unambitious writer and the really good unpublished poem are the things we lack most at this time. There is, of course, the problem of sustenance.”

26. Only Read What Is Good

Gertrude Stein told Ernest Hemingway:

You should only read what is truly good or what is frankly bad.

Which of these Ernest Hemingway quotes is your favorite? Let us know in the comments.

PRACTICE

I love Hemingway’s questions for himself, “What did I know best that I had not written about and lost? What did I know about truly and care for the most?”

Ask those questions of yourself, then write whatever story comes to mind.

For this practice, write for fifteen minutes. When your time is up, post your practice in the comments section below to get feedback. Afterward, feel free to continue working on your story. And if you post, please make sure to give feedback to other writers.

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(8) Testers Wanted: SuperSpeed Golf

If you want to hit the ball farther, you need to swing the club faster. That’s basic math.

But how do you swing the club faster, while still keeping your swing under control?

That, my friends, is the million dollar question. The folks at SuperSpeed Golf believe they have an answer.

A few weeks ago we ran a story on the how’s and why’s of SuperSpeed Golf. In a nutshell, it’s called Overspeed Training: you swing a shaft weighted to be 20% lighter than your standard drive, another that’s 10% lighter and a third that’s 5% heavier, each as hard as you can. SuperSpeed Golf says virtually everyone will pick up swing speed after the first try.

TESTERS WANTED!

SuperSpeed Golf says its protocols can permanently rewire your neurological pathways to boost your swing speed and help you hit the ball a bit farther. They have the science to back it up and plenty of Tour players use it during their practice routine. But here at MyGolfSpy, we want to know what gains you – the avid golfer – can achieve by using SuperSpeed Golf.

We’re looking for eight of you — yep, eight – to test, review and keep a SuperSpeed Golf set in return for your commitment to use the set for the rest of your golf season and report on the results.

Additionally, SuperSpeed will also provide you with a Swing Speed Radar so you can track your progress as you go through the protocols.

This review opportunity is open to any avid golfer in the U.S. or Canada.

HOW TO APPLY:

All of MyGolfSpy’s Community reviews require a serious commitment on the part of the reviewer. You will need to be motivated, detail oriented and savvy with online forums, so please make sure you read the following instructions carefully and apply in the proper place.

Our member reviews are published in our Community Forum (click here to check them out). Writing a thorough, detailed and honest review is a lot of work – you’ll be writing detailed reviews of your two-month-plus journey, as well as participating in the MyGolfSpy Community Forum itself to answer questions and discuss product performance with other golfers.

That means to be a potential reviewer you must be a registered member of the MyGolfSpy Community Forum, where you’ll find nearly 70,000 like-minded golfers from all over the world anxious to talk about golf equipment.

To apply to test, review and keep a SuperSpeed Golf set and a Swing Speed Radar, here’s what you have to do:

– First, please sign up for the MyGolfSpy Community Forum (click here to register).

– Second, apply ONLY in the Official SuperSpeed Golf Review Application thread in the MyGolfSpy Forum (click here).

We’ll be announcing our testers next week, so be sure to check the MyGolfSpy Community Forum to see if you’ve been selected.



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The Ultimate Guide on How to Make Your Workouts More Effective

There are many guides on how to live a happy life. Every one of them includes physical activity as one of the crucial elements of a fulfilled life. You need to work out at least a couple of times a week to maintain your physical and mental health. It is possible to find enough time …

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Thursday, August 30, 2018

GIVEAWAY! – WIN ONE OF THE FIRST SETS OF MIZUNO JPX919 IRONS

Yesterday we lifted the curtain on Mizuno’s new JPX919 lineup. Styled to appeal to a modern, aggressive golfer, the JPX919 family offers three distinct models that can be mixed and matched to fill the performance needs of most any golfer. Insomuch as golf clubs can be so, the new JPX919 are sexy as hell. It’s okay to feel a little naughty looking through the pictures.

We’re certain Mizuno fans, and passionate golfers everywhere will be itching to get their hands on the new models. For one lucky golfer, we’re going to expedite that process in the best way possible.

Win A Set of Mizuno JPX919 Irons

We’re extremely excited to offer our readers the chance to win one of the first sets of Mizuno JPX919s available anywhere. We’re talking a full on win it before you can buy it situation, and we’re talking about a fully custom set of Mizuno JPX919 Irons.

  • You choose the model…or models, Mizuno loves combo sets.
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You will get your JPX919 100% your way. It’s like Burger King if Burger King made some of the best-performing, best-feeling, and best-looking iron on the market today.

HOW TO ENTER

For your chance to win one of the first sets of Mizuno JPX919 Irons, here’s what you need to do.

  • Using the form below, subscribe to the MGS Newsletter (if you’re already subscribed, you don’t need to sign-up again).
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The Script Polish: How to Maximize Your Screenplay’s Impact and Minimize Risk of Rejection

This guest post is by B. O’Malley. B.O’Malley started his film career in 1994, reading and covering scripts for the literary agency Media Artists Group. In 1997, he went to work for Roger Corman (Little Shop of Horrors), then in 1999 assembled a team of top-notch screenwriters to launch the script coverage service SCREENPLAY READERS.

Polishing a screenplay, or doing a polish on a script, is a part of the screenwriting process that few screenwriters ever go into detail about when asked. Even when plied with liquor.

The Script Polish: How to Maximize Your Screenplay's Impact and Minimize Risk of Rejection

Sure, we’ve all heard writers and producers use terms like “tighten it up” or “give it some polish” or “tweak it for production,” but what do any of those terms really mean?

I’ve been reading screenplays professionally since 1994, and started my own script coverage service, Screenplay Readers, in 1999. Over those years, I’ve come across countless screenwriting articles on “how to write your first draft,” or “how to write your script in X number of days,” or variations on that evergreen maxim, “writing is rewriting.”

But for some reason, the specifics of what goes into a script polish have been given rather short shrift, by comparison. And that begins by first breaking “the script polish” process down into two general goals a screenwriter needs to focus on when sitting down to polish her script.

Those two general goals are maximizing impact and minimizing risk.

Maximizing Impact: Making Your Script as Powerful as It Can Be

The primary goal of a script polish, naturally, is to make that script tighter, more entertaining, and more sellable as a motion picture or tv show. Writers seem to forget that their screenplay is first and foremost a blueprint — a blueprint which dozens, or perhaps even hundreds of paid, skilled people will be asked to follow if your script is produced.

That is, every word on every page of your screenplay is a word spoken by a paid actor, or a set designed by a paid production designer or set decorator. Every line of action on your page is a stunt that needs to be planned by a skilled stunt coordinator, or a heavy dramatic moment that needs to be shaped to perfection between the director and the actors.

Every single line of dialogue, description, or action may look like tiny, cheap black pixels on your screen right now, but those cheap little black pixels represent hundreds of future man hours and perhaps millions of dollars when that script comes to fruition as finished, produced motion picture or tv show.

That’s why it’s so important to approach the script polish as one of your last opportunities to make everything about that “blueprint” as powerful and as impactful and as entertaining as it can be.

When we’re writing our first draft — or even twentieth — we’re typically focused on simply making sure things work in a basic, functional way: Do scenes connect? Does the character face danger? Does she grow from Act One to Act Three? Do events in Act One set the story in motion? Do subsequent events or actions drive the story forward?

To sum all that up by straining an automotive metaphor: our main job as screenwriters during those initial drafts is to just get the car off the assembly line and make sure it, you know, drives.

But during the polish, our main job is much different. Our job becomes making sure the driver of that car feels good sitting in it, experiences exhilaration just as much when the car hits straightaways as they do when it hits curves, and maybe even revels in that “new car smell,” so to speak. In other words, the polish is all about dialing in the overall emotional impact for the script’s audience.

So to maximize that audience impact — to maximize what our audience/readers feel and think — during the polish, we writers need to ask several key questions.

And these questions need to be asked of every single act, every single sequence, every single scene, every single paragraph, every single line, and every single word in our screenplay.

4 Questions to Maximize Your Script’s Impact

The questions are as follows, and are to be asked in sequence of every element in your script:

1. Is the act, sequence, scene, paragraph, line, or word even necessary?

That is, does the entire act serve a purpose? Is the scene you’ve written serving some sort of function? Is the line of description you’ve written completely redundant because you’ve already given us that information previously?

Or even — at the micro level, and at the risk of seemingly nitpicky — is the word you’ve written just as redundant as that aforementioned scene? Is it just taking up space? (For example, do you really need to tell us that such-and-such character is wearing a cape of very dark Crimson red? Or could we get by with just red?)

2. Next, if that element is necessary, is there a more brief way to convey it?

Screenplays are visual, not literary. If you can keep our eyes moving down the page by using fewer words, it makes for an easier, more visual, more impactful read.

3. And if it’s already brief, is there a stronger way to convey it?

Is there “chaff” in your scene that gets in the way of the “wheat?” Joan Jett famously said “Don’t bore us; get to the chorus,” although I severely doubt she used a semicolon.

A script polish, put simply, needs to look for opportunities to take flabby scenes and pack them tighter. Get into your scene later if that helps. Or, if your dialogue suffers from “Tarantino-itis,” consider nixing a lot of the small talk and get to the stuff that matters most, faster.

4. If it’s already strong, is there a more original way to convey it?

A polish is about your signature as a writer. If you spent ten drafts making your script functional, then your polish is your opportunity to look for moments where an element (act, sequence, scene, line, word) can be more creative or original, or something we haven’t quite seen before.

Minimizing Risk: Helping the Reading Lower Her Guard

The second goal of a script polish might seem perfunctory, or boring, because it has a bit to do with technicalities, such as grammar and spelling. But it’s so much more than that.

I look at the goal as being simply to remove as many non-creative excuses as possible that a reader might have for putting a script down mid-read.

By “non-creative excuses,” I mean excuses that have nothing to do with the creative elements of your script, such as the characters, story, dialogue, etc. I break these non-creative elements down into two primary categories: Presentation and Strategy.

Presentation

Whether it’s bad spelling, bad grammar, improper punctuation, poor usage or word selection, or just plain ole bad script formatting — professionals who read scripts see these things and immediately feel queasy. I’m feeling queasy right now talking about it.

Your primary purpose in properly performing the Presentation portion of your polish (preferably) is to assuage any doubts in the reader’s mind that, when reading your script, they’re in the hands of a professional, competent writer.

Simply put: if you botch the presentation in any way, you fail to assuage those doubts.

If you fail to assuage those doubts, you lose the reader. If you lose the reader and they’re an assistant, that assistant won’t pass your script up to their agent or producer boss. If you lose the reader and they’re an agent or producer boss, the agent or producer boss won’t ask their assistant to read anything else you send them ever again.

So it’s vital that you get this right.

Step Away

To that end, before doing any sort of script polish or last pass on your script’s presentation elements, it’s absolutely essential that you step away from your script for a good period of time — I recommend at least forty or fifty years — then come back to it with fresh eyes. (Kidding! One week minimum is all that’s needed.)

Read Slowly

And then, after you’ve had some time away from it, read every single word, slowly. Too often we writer types race through from draft to draft and we end up skimming our own work, missing glaring typos.

It’s equally important during the presentation polish that you not rely on the spellcheck or grammar checker that comes standard in your screenwriting app. Truth told, I can’t name a single screenwriting app with a spellcheck/grammar check function that works well.

Instead, use a third-party spellchecker such as Grammarly or Ginger. But be warned, even Grammarly drops the ball. A lot. So you might want to check for errors that Grammarly misses by using the spellcheck tool in Google Docs, or, really, whatever other third-party, dedicated spellchecking app you prefer.

Whatever you do, just make sure you take the time to slowly, manually, read through your script, word-for-word, at some point in your script polish.

Check Your Formating

With regards to script format, thar be oodles of guides out there that show you how to do this right, and most screenwriting apps keep you “coloring within the lines,” so I won’t do a deep dive on the intricacies of script format, but I will give you a few pointers that are important to remember during the polish:

  • Don’t include your WGA registration number on your title page. This flags you as an amateur.
  • Don’t fiddle with the margins or element margins in order to “cheat” your script’s page count.
  • Use bold, underline, and italics sparingly. Save them for big moments you’d like the reader’s attention to be drawn to.

Strategy

After you’ve (following the first tenets of this article) maximized your script’s impact, and after you’ve made sure your presentation is as tight and clean as can be, the final step in your script polish needs to be putting on shoes.

But not just any shoes.

You need to put on the shoes of every person who’s going to be reading your script.

That is, imagine your script going out to several different entities: a major studio, a low-level TV producer, a neophyte agent or manager, a no-name actor.

Then imagine you’re each of those people and read your script, asking yourself “Am I enjoying this?” “Am I getting what the writer is trying to say here?” “Is this interesting?” “Is this marketable?” “Can I make money with this?” “Would I, as an agent, be comfortable sending this out to A-list actors or producers?”

Next, try on some different shoes.

Imagine your script in the hands of someone from a completely different culture, race, age, gender, or overall worldview.

And then ask yourself those same questions.

Your Shoes Matter

See, Hollywood is increasingly a place where people of all different backgrounds are converging (although it’s still very much a work in progress), so getting yourself out of your own “bubble” is paramount when considering how your script reads from the perspective of people with different backgrounds.

If you get into one of those different “bubbles” and then ask those questions above, and it turns out that any of the answers make you feel at all squeamish or unsure, or make you feel like there’s a strong possibility that someone from background X or Y who’s reading your script may have a negative response to it, stop and take a moment.

Dive into that element or scene which you think might be problematic for that person from that background and ask yourself honestly: Can this scene or element be tweaked a little to avoid that situation? Is there a cleaner or stronger way I can present this?

Avoiding controversy is not always easy, and it’s definitely not the main goal of what I’m suggesting. I’m not suggesting you censor yourself.

The Strategy goal of your script polish is simply you, the screenwriter, getting out of your own head and imagining the script being read by different types of professionals, and by people of different backgrounds.

To repeat: the goal isn’t to avoid offense. The goal is to make sure you’re not needlessly shooting down your script’s chances of getting read by a reader of any kind — whether she’s a straight black studio head or a gay white college intern. The goal is to avoid rejection of your script for stupid, preventable reasons.

Make Your Script Polish Count

Spec scripts usually have just one chance to wow a reader. The script polish is the screenwriter’s last chance not only to make sure that every little moment, and every big moment, is as powerful and as entertaining as can be, but also to make sure that everything about the script’s look, feel, voice, and message combines in such a way that any reader can feel confident in recommending it to others.

Without these two key goals, a script polish is just moving words around on the page — a process which becomes indistinguishable from writing just another draft. A polish must have purpose. These two goals are the purpose.

What do you look for in your script polish? Let us know in the comments.

PRACTICE

For today’s practice, take fifteen minutes to give the scene below a script polish.

First, pare down this scene to its absolute essentials. That is, give us only what we need to picture the scene as we read it as if we’re picturing the scene on a movie screen. Keep things moving. Eliminate all unnecessary words — across all elements (dialogue, scene heading, action, etc.)

Then, strengthen the words that remain. Take liberties with all of it. Use more vivid terms and more colorful, impactful vocabulary.

When you’re done, share your polished scene in the comments below, and be sure to leave feedback for your fellow writers.

INT. WEST ANGELES HOSPITAL ON THE WEST SIDE OF LOS ANGELES — DAY

BOB MELVIN (40’s) is a man with crossed eyes who is six feet tall wearing a tan suit and leather shoes and carrying a briefcase and is also carrying a laptop that is from the 1990’s. He is blond and has a beard and has a mean look on his face, probably from the years of working in a coal mine, pretending to be Loretta Lynn, which is funny because that lady played in the movie Coal Miner’s Daughter.

He greets DOCTOR DEATH (80’s) — five feet tall, buck teeth, wearing a clown wig and lab coat and holding a clipboard with a photo of his wife, Tilda Swinton. He has a surly demeanor and tends to throw his weight around.

BOB
Hello Doctor Death. I am here to inquire about my wife. I need to know whether or not she is going to recover from her marshmallow allergy. This is very important to me, as I am her husband.

DOCTOR DEATH
Hello Bob Melvin. Your wife has just undergone some serious surgery and we are working on returning her to you as quickly as possible. I can assure you that we did our absolute best in working on her. I would like you to see these slides I took during the surgery, showing what we did.

Doctor Death then pulls out a remote control and clicks it. The lights in the room turn off and a slide projector projects an image on the wall of Doctor Death hanging out with several STRIPPERS in a hot tub.

DOCTOR DEATH
Oops. Wrong slide.

What did you come up with? Here’s an example of how I would do it:

INT. HOSPITAL — DAY

BOB MELVIN (40’s) — tall, crosseyed, wearing a suit — stands with his old laptop.

DR. DEATH (80’s) — stocky, short, buck-toothed — enters.

BOB
Doc. How is she?

DR. DEATH
The surgery went well. Let me show you what we did.

Dr. Death whips out a remote, dims the lights, and fires up a slideshow.

SLIDE: Dr. Death with some strippers in a hot tub.

DR. DEATH
Oh, crap. Wrong slide.

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Wednesday, August 29, 2018

5 Big Reasons Why Self Care Should Be A Non Negotiable

It makes no difference whether you are a professional, a student, and a homemaker – whatever! – self-care is of top priority – it matters, a lot. Whatever your status, each one is expected to balance work responsibilities, play, home – and the challenges that come with these. Self-care is a practice that helps to …

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How to Sell Books to Someone Other Than Your Mom

Writing books is a ton of work. And when you’re done, you probably want to share it with the world, and make a profit on all of your labor. But the sales don’t come like you’d expect — except from your supportive family, of course. If only you knew how to sell books to someone other than your mom!

How to Sell Books to Someone Other Than Your Mom

There’s nothing wrong with selling a book to Mom, by the way.

But ideally you write and sell a book that thousands of people can’t wait to get their hands on.

Here’s how to do it.

How to Sell Books to Someone Other Than Your Mom: The 4-Step Plan

If this is you, I feel your pain. In 2016 I launched my novel, The Bean of Life, and sold about 50 copies, most to family and friends. And while I’m very grateful for their support, it wasn’t followed by the kind of viral attention I’d been hoping for.

Maybe you’ve launched a book before and it went something like this. If you haven’t launched a book, you’re probably worried that your story will be the same.

But it doesn’t have to.

There’s a way to write books and sell them to lots of people, Mom included. And it involves studying those who’ve come before and mimicking their actions, but without merely copying them.

Let’s jump in.

Step 1: Pinpoint Your Ultra-Specific Genre

My first mistake is that I wrote a genre-less book. Being the witty person I am, I tried to coin my own: “Caffeinated Realism” (it was a book about a guy saving the world with coffee, har har).

But Amazon doesn’t have a category for that. And I was foolish to think my wittiness could penetrate the avalanche of content my readers would see before anything I threw at them.

If you want to sell books to someone other than your mom, you have to study and pinpoint your genre.

To do this, dive deep into Amazon’s genre classifications and get ultra-specific. Don’t just pick “Romance.” There are millions of romance books in a long list of genres, including “Paranormal,” “Sports, and “Billionaires.”

Do a search of the genres you like to write in (mine is contemporary crime and historical fiction), and start exploring the left side-bar where all the sub-genres are listed. Then pinpoint your genre before you write a single word of your next book.

To help you, here is a Story Grid graphic that illustrates just how unique each genre can be.

Step 2: Give Readers What They Want

Your next goal is to study the sub-genre and its conventions, and use them in new and innovative ways.

So, for example, if you choose “Crime Noir” as your genre, there are requirements you must fulfill in order to meet your readers’ expectations. A detective, cop, or private eye is usually the protagonist. A sultry dame isn’t hard to find. A crime, and a twisted criminal, establishes the conflict.

And you can be sure that some surprises (and betrayals) are in the bones of the plot.

As you consider how to use these conventions, remember that there is a big difference between subverting your readers’ expectations, and surprising them. Be careful with too much subversion, as it can turn readers away more than you’d like. While I loved the film, Star Wars: The Last Jedi is a prime example of subverting too many expectations and angering an audience. Too much subversion can feel like manipulation.

Rather, surprise by using the trope, but not in a familiar way. The sultry dame in a “Crime Noir” story can seem like a traitor, and even become a traitor, but for a shocking or unexpected reason.

This will keep your readers — including Mom — coming back for more!

Step 3: Plan and Write Small Episodes

I used to want to write grand, epic novels.

But after watching the ground-breaking AMC television show Breaking Bad, my love of novels is gone. Now, I want to write seasons, and dispense my stories with the same white-knuckle intensity and anticipation-building structure as my new favorite show.

If you’ve never seen Breaking Bad, it’s about a high school chemistry teacher who finds out that he has terminal cancer. Shell-shocked by this new reality, and embarrassed that he will leave his family with next to nothing, he decides to use his chemistry wizardry to cook methamphetamine before he dies. Thus begins one of the most perfectly structured stories ever told.

The more you can study episodic storytelling, the more apt you’ll be to writing stories that grab readers and refuse to let go. Seriously — I can’t not know what happens to my favorite characters in my favorite show. I’m like a drug addict, but thankfully my intoxicant is a great story.

You need to tap into this energy if you want to sell books to the masses, and not just your mom.

To do it, write a draft or outline of the entire story you want to tell. Don’t worry about the episodes right away.

Then, once you’ve drafted anywhere from 40,000 to 100,000 words (whatever works for you and your genre), go through the whole piece and identify the major changes. Specifically, identify:

  • When characters make enormous, high-stakes choices
  • When characters suffer for enormous, high-stakes choices
  • When new threats appear that endanger these characters

These make for great breaks between episodes. Then, to separate whole seasons (and some episodes, as you don’t want to drive your reader too crazy with addiction), look for:

  • Moments when characters can take a deep breath after consequences are resolved and the danger is (momentarily) passed
  • Moments when characters believe they can take such a deep breath, but actually can’t

These make for stunning conclusions to “seasons” of a story, as they resolve the conflict of the season, but keep the reader hooked and needing to know what happens in the next part of the tale.

Step 4: Test and Reflect to Stay On-Target

While Breaking Bad, and its prequel Better Call Saul, are crown jewels of episodic storytelling, others aren’t so lucky.

Game of Thrones, for example, is gaining critics while losing viewers. Many are complaining that the high-stakes drama of earlier seasons has been replaced with fan-service fight scenes and dragons.

It seems that the show, or really its writers, have strayed off-target, and lost touch with what made their genre-specific, fan-pleasing, and episodic story work so well.

This is why you need to study your work and make sure it’s hitting the sweet spot. There are two points in time when you need to take time to test or reflect on whether your story is still working: Before publication, and after a season’s end.

Test Before Publication

Before publication, you’ll want to utilize beta readers. Recruit readers who are avid fans of the genre.

To find them, look for them and reach out to them through book-related social media platforms, like Goodreads and Facebook (just search for books and genre terms in a Group search). Another great way to connect with readers in your genre is an online writing community (since writers are usually great readers) and solicit them within the community and its guidelines.

Reflect After a Season

After a season, you’ll want to get feedback from existing readers. Create a survey with Google Forms or SurveyMonkey and send it to your readers through email or social media.

When you write the survey, base your questions on your genre’s specific tropes and/or requirements. What you want to learn is whether or not your story created a satisfying reading experience within the genre, and how willing and eager the reader is to find out what happens next (or to read your next series, if this one is concluding).

By gathering this essential information, you are essentially creating a research loop that will sustain your writing business and keep readers flowing into your circle, rather than out of it.

Your writing process begins with research (by pinpointing your ultra-specific genre), utilizes it to align your drafts with an ideal finished product (via beta readers), and ends with it (soliciting feedback from readers, which informs future episodes, seasons, and whole series).

This is the intentional structure you needs to sell books to lots and lots of people, and not just your dear, sweet mother.

Give the People What They Want

When I published The Bean of Life, I knew I had written a good book. After two years of beta testing and revision, it was a finished product to be proud of.

But I also knew that I had written it for me. It was my “baby,” a decade-long dream I was pursuing.

And while the book is good, and while my launch strategy was decent, the book wasn’t created with the reader’s desires ultimately in mind.

That’s why as I plan a sequel, I’m doing things a lot differently.

I’m going to give the people what they want. 

I hope that you, as you write your next story, will too.

Because that’s the only way to make money off your hard work.

What keeps you reading your favorite authors and anticipating their next books? Let us know in the comments.

PRACTICE

For fifteen minutes, jump over to Amazon and explore a genre you’d like to write in (click on one of the images at the top of the page to start). Go as deep down the sub-genre rabbit hole as you can, and find a highly-rated book and study it. Read some reviews and analyze the books meta-content (description, pages, word count, anything you can find).

Then write a short reflection on the experience in the comments below. What did you learn about the possibilities of this genre? What do readers seem to want? What kind of surprising choices would you like to see in a story in this sub-genre?

Share your reflection in the comments below, and then leave a comment on someone else’s research!

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First Look – 2019 Mizuno JPX919 Irons

Tuesday, August 28, 2018

THE BEST RAIN GEAR OF 2018

Writing Prompt: Monster

Sometimes, all you need to give your writing a boost is an inspiring writing prompt. And when it comes to writing prompts, we’ve got you covered.

Writing Prompt: Monster

A Monstrous Writing Prompt

Today’s writing prompt is just one word: monster.

Want to take it further? Here are some questions to get you started:

  • What — or who — is the monster?
  • What does your protagonist know about the monster?
  • What does your protagonist not know about the monster?
  • What does the monster want?
  • What does your protagonist want?
  • What is the monster’s greatest strength?
  • What is the monster’s greatest weakness?

Get Writing

A writing prompt on its own isn’t very interesting. The exciting part is the story it inspires you to create. So, go write your monstrous story!

And while you’re at it, why not enter your story in our Fall Writing Contest? We have a prompt for every contest, and guess what, this contest’s prompt is monster (just like today’s prompt).

So give the prompt a shot, and after you start your story in today’s practice, continue it in the contest. You’ll get feedback, get published, and maybe even win some amazing prizes!

What ideas does the prompt “monster” inspire for you? Let us know in the comments.

PRACTICE

Write about a monster. Write for fifteen minutes. Then post your practice in the comments for feedback. If you post, be sure to give feedback to three other writers. Happy writing!

Bonus: Enter your story in the Fall Writing Contest for a chance to win!

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First Look: Srixon Z 585/785/U85 Irons

You can make a compelling case that the Srixon-Cleveland equipment lineup – from top to bottom – is as strong as any in the game. From one end of the bag to the other, Srixon-Cleveland offers a  choice for everyone from a high handicapper looking for as much help as possible to the scratch looking for a sex-on-a-stick blade.

Srixon’s two-year-old 565 and 765 irons were both top performers in past MyGolfSpy Most Wanted testing and are favorites among MGS readers and staff. Despite their performance and popularity, the sand in the old hourglass has run out for both, and golf’s product calendar says it’s time for an update.

We shared our First Look at Srixon’s new Z 85 metal woods yesterday, an upgrade Srixon considers revolutionary compared to its previous models, When it comes to irons, however, the Srixon brand is traditionally more evolution than revolution. Incremental change is the phrase they use, and the new Z 585 and Z 785 irons sets, while not radically different than their high-performing predecessors, do bring a few interesting upgrades to the party that are sure to turn a few heads.

Ch-ch-changes

Whenever an OEM unveils an upgrade, it’s always fair to ask if it’s an improvement or if it’s just a change to satisfy the calendar and to sell something new. The cynics, of course, will say it’s nothing more than a marketing-fueled money grab. Generally speaking, however; companies on two-year product cycles view their new releases as part of a product continuum: each iteration featuring performance enhancements the OEM believes will provide golfers with an incrementally better stick.

Or, as Robert Browning once wrote, “A man’s reach should exceed his grasp, or what’s a Heaven for?

The upgrades to the Z 585s and  785s are subtle and, in Srixon’s own words, incremental. The 585s have evolved into a bit of a category buster: they’re the most Game Improvement-y irons in Srixon’s lineup, but wouldn’t be out of place in the new Player’s Distance category. Comps include Mizuno’s JPX 900 Forged, Callaway’s Apex CF 16 (or whatever replaces it) and Titleist’s AP2.

The Z 785’s are Srixon’s next generation forged, cavity back player’s iron – a refinement of the popular Z 765. Comps include the Titleist 718 CB, Wilson Staff FG Tour V6 and Mizuno MP 18, among others.

“They’re two great feeling, great looking irons,” says Srixon Marketing Director Brian Schielke, not unexpectedly. “Compact, thin top line. The 585s are more about feel and distance, the 785s more about feel and control.”

And both, when Srixon’s updated Utility irons are added to the mix, can make for some unique combo sets.

Feel With Added Distance

The Z 585 was MyGolfSpy’s Most Wanted Game Improvement Iron for 2017 – it featured a forged 1020 carbon steel head with a high strength SUP10 steel face. Not for nothing, so does the new Z 585.

So where’s the beef?

It’s in the groove. Speed Groove, that is.

“Imagine the face of a big trampoline with spring around the outside,” says Schielke. “What we’ve done is milled out a little channel around the perimeter, making the face more flexible, so you get a little more ball speed.”

Face flexibility is the thing in distance irons, and every OEM has its own take on it. More face flex over a wider area of the clubface helps reduce distance loss on mishits and maximizes direct hits. Feel, however, can be a problem in this category (Urethane Microspheres, anyone?), so Srixon is trying to mitigate that with a black material covering the Speed Groove.

“Some distance irons are clicky,” says Schielke. “These have that soft material surrounding the high strength face, which absorbs a lot of the vibrations.”

The 3- through 7-irons feature a full Speed Groove that circles the entire cavity back, while the 8- and 9-irons have a sole groove only. The PW and SW have no groove.

The soft, black dampening material raised quite a stink a couple of months ago when we showed early pictures of the 585s from the USGA Conforming website. Quite frankly, those shots made the club look awful. In person, while they may not be everyone’s cup of tea, the 585s do appear a bit more refined – maybe not quite as clean as the 565, but beauty, as they say, is in the eye of the golfer. If you’re the type who spends time every day gazing at your clubs as they sit in the bag waiting for you to take them out to play, and a black outline just isn’t your thing, the look may put you off. On the course, if you’re looking at the back of the club while swinging, you’re doing it wrong.

Of greater import, do Speed Grooves work? Srixon’s own internal testing suggests there’s something there. Comparing 7-iron ball speeds with the JPX 900 Forged and the Titleist AP2, Srixon tells us – not surprisingly – the 585 out ball-sped the Mizuno by just over 1 MPH, and the Titleist by nearly 4 MPH. As always, consider the source.

After a few rounds and range sessions we can say when it comes to feel, the Speed Grooves perform as advertised: the 585s are an excellent feeling iron. Distance-wise, they’re certainly not lacking. MyGolfSpy will be running its own tests to compare against the rest of the field.

Srixon’s unique V.T. Sole has been adjusted just a wee bit for the 585, as well. It’s slightly wider compared to the 565 to improve turf interaction, an attribute at which the 565’s already excelled.

Workability and Feel

Cosmetically, Srixon didn’t do much at all to the Z 785, which is probably a good thing. The 765 was a pretty sweet looking iron, and its progeny is as well. The 785 is still forged from a single billet of 1020 carbon steel, but there are a couple of functional tweaks.

“There’s a little more material behind the ball to help feel,” says Zack Oakley, Srixon’s brand manager. “It’s right in the middle, and that’s where the better players are supposed to be striking it. It aids in workability so that you can move it around a little easier than before.”

That extra material adds a little oomph to the club, as well. Srixon says its staffers are picking up some yards with the 785s, while achieving a higher ball flight and a steeper landing angle.

In addition, shaping has been adjusted just a tad. It’s a wee bit more compact than the 765, with a slightly sharper topline. The V.T. sole has also been tweaked – with a little bit more leading-edge bounce.

“The Tour guys love it,” says Schielke. “They feel they can hit down as hard as they want, and it just cuts through the turf. And for people who do hit a fraction behind the ball, it maintains more speed through the turf. So rather than coming up short of the green, you’ll maybe make the front of the green on a mishit.”

Srixon is not coming out with a new blade at this time, and the 2016 Z 965 blade is not currently listed on Srixon’s website.

As we said earlier, Srixon is enthusiastically promoting the idea of combo sets with the new Zs. The 585 and 785 are pretty close in terms of face shape and size – the biggest differences are the sole width, the perimeter, and the back cavity design. Despite the black Speed Groove material on the 585s, the clubs don’t look mismatched in the same bag, and spec-wise, you could say they combine by design.

And if you want to jazz up your combo set, Srixon is updating – and expanding – it’s Utility iron.

#1 on Tour

Srixon’s Z U65 Utility irons are the number one utility iron on Tour, a ranking of which Srixon is justifiably proud.

“Most of our staffers have one or two in play,” says Schielke. “They’ll play a practice round or a regular round with someone who’s a non-staffer, and the next day that non-staffer will be in our Tour trailer asking us to build one for him.”

The U65 has been popular at retail, too, to the point where Srixon simply can’t keep them in stock.

Again, if it’s so good, why mess with a good thing?

Well, more options for your combo set, for one.

“We’ve designed both irons sets and the new Z U85 Utility irons for progressive sets,” says Oakley, “to make it easy to mix and match.” The U85s do carry a higher price tag – by $58 per stick – compared to the 585/785s, so more Utility irons means a higher price tag (depending on your Utility to Hybrid ratio). At $199, the Srixon’s are a full $50 less expensive than TaylorMade’s GAPR, and Callaway’s X Forged Utility.

The U85 features full hollow-body construction, with the same 1020 forged head and SUP10 high strength steel face as the 585 irons. Compared to the U65s, the U85s have a wider sole and a deeper Center of Gravity.

“Full hollow construction is the in thing now,” says Oakley. “It lets you bring the CG down to get the ball up, especially in the 2- and 3-irons, where getting the ball up is more important than anything.”

“You can do some things with the weighting that aren’t visible,” adds Schielke. “It looks like a blade but has the performance and forgiveness of a cavity back.”

To add to your combo set options, Srixon is offering the U85s in 2-iron through 6-iron. The U65s were available on 2, 3 and 4 only. For example, if you’re looking for distance and forgiveness, you could combine the 4, 5 and 6 U85 utilities with the 585s in 7-PW, or you could combine the 4 through 6 Utilities with the 785s for workability and forgiveness, or you could piece together a mixture of Utilities, 585s and 785s. Srixon is making a wide array of no upcharge shafts available, to make mixing and matching that much easier.

“We really don’t know how many utility irons we can sell,” admit Schielke. “That’s because we’ve sold through our inventory over the last two years. We’re trying to forecast better for this model.”

Might we see a full set of hollow-body irons from Srixon anytime soon? Schielke didn’t say yes, but then again, he didn’t say no, either.

“We’re definitely considering it.”

Options, Pricing, and Availability

The Srixon Z 585 irons are in 3-iron through AW, and a 7-piece set sells for $999 in steel, $1,199 in graphite. The stock steel shaft is the Nippon Modus3 105; stock graphite is the Miyazaki Kuala. The Golf Pride Tour Velvet 360 is the stock grip.

The Z 785 is also available in 3-iron through AW, with the same $999 price for a 7-piece set. The Nippon Modus3 120 is the stock shaft (there’s no stock graphite offering), with the same Tour Velvet 360 grip.

The Z U85 Utility will be available in 2- through 6-iron, with the UST Recoil 95 and the Tour Velvet stock. It will sell for $199.

Srixon is offering an aggressive list of no upcharge shaft options for the entire lineup, including Nippon’s Pro Modus3 and Pro 950 lines, the Dynamic Gold, Dynamic Gold Tour Issue, the DG 105 and DG 120 as well as the True Temper AMT Black and Tour White. KBS Tour, Tour 90, Tour V, Tour FLT, C-Taper, C-Taper, $-Taper and the 560 and 580 Junior Shafts are also no upcharge options, as are the Project X, Project X PXi, and Project X LZ. The Recoil 95, Recoil SMACWRAP and Steel Fiber 95’s are graphite options.

Just as aggressive is the no upcharge grip selection, which includes pretty much every grip Golf Pride, Lamkin and Winn offer.

You can preorder the new Z series irons at selected retailers and on Srixon’s website now and will be available at retail starting September 14th.



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